Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM
Awwww... =^-^= *blushes* I'm sooo happy! Thank you so, SOOOO much for commenting on my fanfic!! ^.^ You guys, you don't know how much I appreciate your comments!! It's so cool to know that people are actually in-love with my story... To be honest, I've never thought of that! ^-^;; And now what, I'm reading such beautiful comments from you guys! o.O;; Thank you so much! I'm so happy! Thankies!! This'll give me encouragement to work on it more!... At one point, I was about to give-up on Dilemma due to school matters... >.> But, reading your comments is good enough for me to carry on!! ^^ Thankx again! (*lol* you can tell I'm really happy.....)
Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM
That was a really good read. I'm glad to be able to finally read something that's typed in English as opposed to a strange mix of 1337 and Engrish.
What surprised me the most was Li's acceptance of Sakura and Eric's relationship...Li always seemed to be the jealous type, and I thought he was gonna open a can of whoop ass...
Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM
Aloha Ryoga! ^.~
Hey, thanks! ^^ Hehe.. Well, yeah. As you may already known, Li's more mature now and wants to retain his manliness as much as he can. Although, it is very hard for him inside... By the way, I just updated Dilemma today [August 29] and there's few pages added! ^.^ Thankx for reading again!
P.S. you should add your e-mail on the notifying list!
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This part was pretty good...you know what I'd like to see? Kero and Spinner starting a popcorn war in the theater...I can also imagine both Li and Eric sitting beside Sakura, both trying to put an arm around her...geez, that'd be hilarious. XD
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Wow ur fanfic is awesome haha i onli dunn lyke the fact tht ruby is with tori
lol where did u get that pic of the older sakura? the main one that u use, i really wanna kno wat anime its from kay?
thanxx n update the story soon
x0x0 Faith --
Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM
Well, there isn't exactly any other girl for Tori to be with, except that one girl(I think her name was Vicky) in the episode where Tori's class did Cinderella...but Ruby's better. She can use magic and she's cuter. Although she WAS a BIT annoying in the show...she needed some DECAFFINATED ritalin.
As for the older Sakura pic, I'm pretty sure PSM made that herself...
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Sup Princess. That was a cool sorry! Didn't think I'd be hooked but I actually am. ( ) I like the way the story's been composed. And it's also easier to read. That's all for me... for now.
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If you want to e-mail her, just click on the little mailbox thing and her e-mail will be displayed in the botom of her post. Just make sure to make it readable.
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Aww..... PSM-sama, your fiction has touched my soul. Thy shall Dilemma rise above thee.. I might sound stupid but, I really do love your story. Please continue it soon.
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Aloha there! ^.^ Aww.. Thank you to everyone who posted their comments on this topic.. Especially to Faith and Ryoga who constantly visited and posted! (Well, of course Ryoga is forced to post here.. I mean, after all, he is getting paid.. *LOL* Ok.. People, I was just kidding... [Thanks a bunch Ryoga!!] )^^ I apologise for saying "thank you" every **** time I post a message.. ^-^;;; It just means I'm really, really flattered!!! OH!! I was really surprised too... By Synthia... I never thought someone would address me with "-sama".. I feel soooo special!! Thank you so much!! OH!! And as for Faith;
Hey there! ^.^ How are you, Faith? First, I'd like to say (oh man.. I have to say it again) thank you!!! ^^ But, anywayz, I'm gonna stop beating around the bush and go to my point; I will answer your questions!! First of all, the "Sakura" picture I used for the main layout IS from another Anime, although, I don't know where I got it from... I actually forgot the original look of that image, since I got used to it as it is. I mainly edited the face and torso area..Also, I adjusted the colour to make it more like "Sakura"... Anywayz, on to your next question. You could e-mail me at these following addresses:
Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM
omg happy early birthdayy! lol wow ur 15?? i wud never hav believed that, u sound so mature like mayb 17 alreadyy! ill email u asap, and also if u find the website u got the pic from can u pls post it? i've been lookin for a pic like that EVERYWHEREEE u hav no idea how happy i was wen i saw it on ur site! i think i cried :P:$ lol do u hav msn?
x0x0 Love the just added bitt! -- Faith and good luck with the rest of ur storii!
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^^ Aloha! Thank you, thank you, thank you!! *lol* [I just anoyed someone by simply repeating those two words...] REALLY??! Did you really think I was older? =^^= *lol* I try to make Dilemma sophisticated and well developed as much as I can.. I don't want it to sound like a fiction, created by a 2 year old child.. *lol* ^-^;;; Anywayz, SURE!! I'll post the site URL if I find it!! ^^;; IT's just that, I'm not even sure where to start looking due to the fact that I've probably had that image for nearly a year now... @_@ Well, I gotta go now! I'm on my school's computer... *lol* Ta ta!
P.S. I have msn.. you can add me if you want! ^.^ (rei_misty27@hotmail.com)
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hi, i love your story so much. i've been reading it all summer, and school just started, and as soon as i get back, i always go on yo
ur site, it's awesome, but i just wish you'd add more to the story, cause i can't wait. lol....... bye
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Hey!!
Your story is great, it has a good start off, and the story is very strong that I couldn't wait for the continuation!!
I especially love the pictures!!
Hope you add in more pictures.
You got a great imagination, so keep on writing.
Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM
Aloha people!! ^^ Thank you Kaji (can I call you that?? ) and Boebobie (did I get that right?? ^^;;; !! @_@ I'm soo exhausted from work today! And my toes are killing me!!!! >.< Stupid high heels.. Well, tata!
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hi! i really and completely and absolutely LOVE yuor website and ESPECIALLY YOUR FANTASTIC FANFICTION!!! (dilemna) you are such a great author! infinite credit!!!!!!!!!!
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Hi hun... I've really enjoyed reading your fanfiction. I promise to write you a review as soon as I have free time - which could be from three to six months from now (*sigh. I've been so busy). BTW, I just wanted to let you know that if you ever need to get ANY of your sites hosted, I'd be more than happy to host you at Midheaven.net :D Love ya!!! *huggles*
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Awww!!! =^___^= Thank you everyone!!!!!
Thank Mads, XC, Dark Nemesis, Dani and Fatima!!! ^_^
Dani, try not typing the letter "s"... I think that's what you're talking about..
Fatima!!!! ^___^ Nyaaaaaaa!!! Thank you Thank you THANK YOU!!!!! =^__^= Oh my gosh!! I'm soo happy!! That'd be so awesome!! Thank you!! Oh and for the review thing, I thank you again!! LOL. ^_^;;; I will be e-mailing you a.s.a.p!!
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Woweeeeeeeeee
How mazing is this! I am too writing a story bout Sakura..not her love life or her grown up..but i want to giv eup now...it seems so crap compared 2 urs!
Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM
Hi!!!!!!!!!
I dont read much [like neva eva] but ur story was awsome..
Ive alwayz wanted tha cardcaptor story 2 go on and 2 c what happends 2 sakura n friends wen they get older..you done a cool az job on doing dat..i hope it makes it on da big screen..keep it up..n ur website so super cool
Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM
woweeee! i love this story so far! being a writer my self, i no good fantasy when i see it! keep up the work girl! hope we can b affies when my sites complete!
Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM
Wow. I love this story so far! I've only just started readin it yesterday and am already up to where it would be updated. lol ( that proves how much of a good story it is .
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I really liked the story. it was tight. Her hair ( sakura) being long is the best pic that ive actually seen. I enjoyed it. I thought li was going to get really mad about Sakuras and Eric"s relationship. Pretty nice twist. I liked it and was surprised.
Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM
I have read the first page of chapter one and found the story enjoyable so far...except (regrettably) for your prologue...your grammar and sentence structure were horrible. I have copied and pasted this portion of the story here and have italicized the corrections for you and deleted any words that were not necessary. Please compared it to what you have written. I know criticism is hard to take but grammar and sentence structure are important for a story to flow properly.
Sakura and Li are (1) a happy couple, whoenjoy (2) the beginning of their teenage life. Madison, who (3) still carries a video camera wherever she goes, Kero, and the fighter girl, Meilin, accompany (4) the couple on dates.
(5)
Everyone embraces(6) this new era where no Clow Cards or mysterious auras are (7) sensed.
1. (the verb 'is' is a singular form used with a singular or one noun, you are writing about two (or more) people and therefore need a plural verb)
2. (the 's' at the end was not needed)
3. (the 'm' was not needed)
4. (sentence structure was poor and confusing)
5. (Sakura and Li were removed and 'couple' put in place of the names because they were used at the beginning of the paragraph. The reader can safely assume "the couple" refers to Sakura and Li)
6. (poor sentence structure)
7. ('were' was changed to 'are' because you are writing in the present, 'were' is used when writing about the past)
Yo!! PSM's work is not sum stuffy, rigid piece of grammar!! For ur info, ur 'corrections' R mixin up the flow of PSM's story. Sakura is a teen, not a pensioner! The orginal flow is just right for the story! If u hav a prob with tht, don't read it! But deffo dnt try and correct it! Thtz wrong!! Im an author to, and i think wat u've dun is way outta order. As for the grammar, spellin, sentence structure in dis msg? Lol dnt even go there!!!
Keep up da gud work PSM!
LOL ive had ma rant now!!
Cardcaptor KeKe x
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Oh, and Alice? I forgot to mention. Before critising others, check ur own work!! I quote "Please compared it to what you have written" I'm no Grammar fan, but shouldn't it read "Please compare it...."
Cardcaptor KeKe xx
Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM
Your story was very nice and intresting! I've been telling it to my cousin and she also thinks that it is COOOOOL! Though, I was sad when you weren't able to do Chap. 5 why? Anywayz! I am looking forward to read the Chap. 5! Hope that you will update it soon! I also hope that many would read your dilemma!!!!
Lots of LOVE,
Card-captor_sakura A.K.A SAkura fan!
Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM
cool site, have u heard of Tsubasa Reservoir chronicles? it has the actual love ife of Sakura and Syaoran. Anyways ur a great writer! loved reading it!
Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM
Cool Fanfiction!!! I luved reading it! have u heard about Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicle? Sakura's actually a Teenager in that and it was created by clamp!^^ Its also about the love life of Sakura and Syaoran ^^.