General Forum
Start a New Topic 
Author
Comment
View Entire Thread
Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

Aloha there! ^.^ Aww.. Thank you to everyone who posted their comments on this topic.. Especially to Faith and Ryoga who constantly visited and posted! (Well, of course Ryoga is forced to post here.. I mean, after all, he is getting paid.. *LOL* Ok.. People, I was just kidding... [Thanks a bunch Ryoga!!] )^^ I apologise for saying "thank you" every **** time I post a message.. ^-^;;; It just means I'm really, really flattered!!! OH!! I was really surprised too... By Synthia... I never thought someone would address me with "-sama".. I feel soooo special!! Thank you so much!! OH!! And as for Faith;

Hey there! ^.^ How are you, Faith? First, I'd like to say (oh man.. I have to say it again) thank you!!! ^^ But, anywayz, I'm gonna stop beating around the bush and go to my point; I will answer your questions!! First of all, the "Sakura" picture I used for the main layout IS from another Anime, although, I don't know where I got it from... I actually forgot the original look of that image, since I got used to it as it is. I mainly edited the face and torso area..Also, I adjusted the colour to make it more like "Sakura"... Anywayz, on to your next question. You could e-mail me at these following addresses:




rei_misty27@hotmail.com
princesssailormars@hellokitty.com
webmistress@ccdilemma.cjb.net




Now, on your third question, well.. actually, I'm 15. BUT! I'm turning 16 soon ^.^ [On November 2!!!]

Well, this has been an awfully long message. Again [and sorry people.. I have to say it again.. ] thank you for posting your comments!!! Ta Ta!

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

Hey Princess Sailor Mars!! Wow! Ive juist checked Dilemma out and Im already into it!!! I think its funny and its a very good story! OH and Li is hot!

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

omg happy early birthdayy! lol wow ur 15?? i wud never hav believed that, u sound so mature like mayb 17 alreadyy! ill email u asap, and also if u find the website u got the pic from can u pls post it? i've been lookin for a pic like that EVERYWHEREEE u hav no idea how happy i was wen i saw it on ur site! i think i cried :P:$ lol do u hav msn?
x0x0 Love the just added bitt! -- Faith and good luck with the rest of ur storii!

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

^^ Aloha! Thank you, thank you, thank you!! *lol* [I just anoyed someone by simply repeating those two words...] REALLY??! Did you really think I was older? =^^= *lol* I try to make Dilemma sophisticated and well developed as much as I can.. I don't want it to sound like a fiction, created by a 2 year old child.. *lol* ^-^;;; Anywayz, SURE!! I'll post the site URL if I find it!! ^^;; IT's just that, I'm not even sure where to start looking due to the fact that I've probably had that image for nearly a year now... @_@ Well, I gotta go now! I'm on my school's computer... *lol* Ta ta!

P.S. I have msn.. you can add me if you want! ^.^ (rei_misty27@hotmail.com)

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

hi, i love your story so much. i've been reading it all summer, and school just started, and as soon as i get back, i always go on yo
ur site, it's awesome, but i just wish you'd add more to the story, cause i can't wait. lol....... bye

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

Thankx a bunch Mina!! ^^ By the way, Chapter 4 is coming soon!!! I can't wait!

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

hi again princess!! i haven't check back on your site that much, but everytime there's another page added!! ^^. Just dropin' by to say hi.

I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPEN NEXT!!!

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

Hey!!
Your story is great, it has a good start off, and the story is very strong that I couldn't wait for the continuation!!
I especially love the pictures!!
Hope you add in more pictures.
You got a great imagination, so keep on writing.

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

Aloha people!! ^^ Thank you Kaji (can I call you that?? ) and Boebobie (did I get that right?? ^^;;; !! @_@ I'm soo exhausted from work today! And my toes are killing me!!!! >.< Stupid high heels.. Well, tata!

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

hi
i really dont no wot im doin
but i love ur story its great
i would neva had though of anything like that!
can't wait for the rest!!

bibi

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

Keep up the good work PSM!!!!

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

You should add more kissing and embrassing. It makes it sexier

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

Hi,
I love how the story is going so far!!
Can't wait to find out what's happening next!
Keep up the good work

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

hi! i really and completely and absolutely LOVE yuor website and ESPECIALLY YOUR FANTASTIC FANFICTION!!! (dilemna) you are such a great author! infinite credit!!!!!!!!!!

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

Hi,PSM.

I thought I'd pay your webside a visit.

I just finished reading Dilemma and I ahve to say...

I personally like it...and I usually don't like lovestories, because they depress me.
Keep the story rolling and see you in Hawaii.

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

hey hun! i love the storie so fae

i was just wondering if theres a mistake in the answer for question 3 in the little quiz. i think the first word is a letter too short, please help!

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

Hi hun... I've really enjoyed reading your fanfiction. I promise to write you a review as soon as I have free time - which could be from three to six months from now (*sigh. I've been so busy). BTW, I just wanted to let you know that if you ever need to get ANY of your sites hosted, I'd be more than happy to host you at Midheaven.net :D Love ya!!! *huggles*

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

Awww!!! =^___^= Thank you everyone!!!!!

Thank Mads, XC, Dark Nemesis, Dani and Fatima!!! ^_^

Dani, try not typing the letter "s"... I think that's what you're talking about..

Fatima!!!! ^___^ Nyaaaaaaa!!! Thank you Thank you THANK YOU!!!!! =^__^= Oh my gosh!! I'm soo happy!! That'd be so awesome!! Thank you!! Oh and for the review thing, I thank you again!! LOL. ^_^;;; I will be e-mailing you a.s.a.p!!

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

can you tell me where to read your book i dont know where to find it

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

Interesting! I read it, and was very excited! I'm writin' a comix about Naru- Sakura's daughter.

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

Great job! I reeeellly enjoyed that and I hope u can continue the story soon!

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

Thank you!!!! =^__^= Please join the Forum and introduce your self on the members page!! ^__^ See you there!

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

I luv how da story is goin' so far!!
Spice somethin' up between Li & Sakura,cuz I luv 2 c dese 2 2gether!
can't wait 4 da next!
Take care

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

Thankx Kaji!! ^__^
LOL... Yeah... that may be a good a idea..
heeheehe..
^__^ Bye-Bye!!

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

Woweeeeeeeeee
How mazing is this! I am too writing a story bout Sakura..not her love life or her grown up..but i want to giv eup now...it seems so crap compared 2 urs!

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

Hi!!!!!!!!!
I dont read much [like neva eva] but ur story was awsome..
Ive alwayz wanted tha cardcaptor story 2 go on and 2 c what happends 2 sakura n friends wen they get older..you done a cool az job on doing dat..i hope it makes it on da big screen..keep it up..n ur website so super cool

ps do u have a boyfriend...

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

it's so great...i wish i could make stories like you...

btw i hope you guys visit the website i have!
i like this site so much!
i wonder if you will have any movies?

this site is... shocking...


Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

Awww!! ^__^
Thankx you guys!! Oh!! Oh!!
BTW, Dilemma has a NEW layout!! ^.^
Also, if you're going to comment on Dilemma, please add you comments here:

http://my-gb.com/Ccdilemma

Thankx again!! And keep reading Dilemma! ^_^

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

woweeee! i love this story so far! being a writer my self, i no good fantasy when i see it! keep up the work girl! hope we can b affies when my sites complete!

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

Wow. I love this story so far! I've only just started readin it yesterday and am already up to where it would be updated. lol ( that proves how much of a good story it is .

I can't wait 'till you update

Great job

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

I really liked the story. it was tight. Her hair ( sakura) being long is the best pic that ive actually seen. I enjoyed it. I thought li was going to get really mad about Sakuras and Eric"s relationship. Pretty nice twist. I liked it and was surprised.

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

I have read the first page of chapter one and found the story enjoyable so far...except (regrettably) for your prologue...your grammar and sentence structure were horrible. I have copied and pasted this portion of the story here and have italicized the corrections for you and deleted any words that were not necessary. Please compared it to what you have written. I know criticism is hard to take but grammar and sentence structure are important for a story to flow properly.

Sakura and Li are (1) a happy couple, whoenjoy (2) the beginning of their teenage life. Madison, who (3) still carries a video camera wherever she goes, Kero, and the fighter girl, Meilin, accompany (4) the couple on dates.
(5)


Everyone embraces(6) this new era where no Clow Cards or mysterious auras are (7) sensed.

1. (the verb 'is' is a singular form used with a singular or one noun, you are writing about two (or more) people and therefore need a plural verb)
2. (the 's' at the end was not needed)
3. (the 'm' was not needed)
4. (sentence structure was poor and confusing)
5. (Sakura and Li were removed and 'couple' put in place of the names because they were used at the beginning of the paragraph. The reader can safely assume "the couple" refers to Sakura and Li)
6. (poor sentence structure)
7. ('were' was changed to 'are' because you are writing in the present, 'were' is used when writing about the past)

Grammar!!!

Yo!! PSM's work is not sum stuffy, rigid piece of grammar!! For ur info, ur 'corrections' R mixin up the flow of PSM's story. Sakura is a teen, not a pensioner! The orginal flow is just right for the story! If u hav a prob with tht, don't read it! But deffo dnt try and correct it! Thtz wrong!! Im an author to, and i think wat u've dun is way outta order. As for the grammar, spellin, sentence structure in dis msg? Lol dnt even go there!!!
Keep up da gud work PSM!
LOL ive had ma rant now!!
Cardcaptor KeKe x

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

Oh, and Alice? I forgot to mention. Before critising others, check ur own work!! I quote "Please compared it to what you have written" I'm no Grammar fan, but shouldn't it read "Please compare it...."
Cardcaptor KeKe xx

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

Your story was very nice and intresting! I've been telling it to my cousin and she also thinks that it is COOOOOL! Though, I was sad when you weren't able to do Chap. 5 why? Anywayz! I am looking forward to read the Chap. 5! Hope that you will update it soon! I also hope that many would read your dilemma!!!!
Lots of LOVE,
Card-captor_sakura A.K.A SAkura fan!

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

cool site, have u heard of Tsubasa Reservoir chronicles? it has the actual love ife of Sakura and Syaoran. Anyways ur a great writer! loved reading it!

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

Cool Fanfiction!!! I luved reading it! have u heard about Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicle? Sakura's actually a Teenager in that and it was created by clamp!^^ Its also about the love life of Sakura and Syaoran ^^.

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

what pg does dilemma finishes or continues?please e-mail me back.o yea great story its amazing!!!!

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

Hey!
I really really love your story and I really hate reading!
I was wondering if you were going to finish it or something cuz I'd really like to know the rest!

Is there another website or something? pls email me
Amazin story!

Re: Dilemma // A fiction about Sakura's Love Life // By: PSM

your story is so nice. and the pop-up you have after i read finished some of the chapters are so cute. your idea is nice. sorry, my sentence are short. my english is bad. sorry. but, i enjoyed your story a lot.