hey hun! i love the storie so fae
i was just wondering if theres a mistake in the answer for question 3 in the little quiz. i think the first word is a letter too short, please help!
Hi hun... I've really enjoyed reading your fanfiction. I promise to write you a review as soon as I have free time - which could be from three to six months from now (*sigh. I've been so busy). BTW, I just wanted to let you know that if you ever need to get ANY of your sites hosted, I'd be more than happy to host you at Midheaven.net :D Love ya!!! *huggles*
Awww!!! =^___^= Thank you everyone!!!!!
Thank Mads, XC, Dark Nemesis, Dani and Fatima!!! ^_^
Dani, try not typing the letter "s"... I think that's what you're talking about..
Fatima!!!! ^___^ Nyaaaaaaa!!! Thank you Thank you THANK YOU!!!!! =^__^= Oh my gosh!! I'm soo happy!! That'd be so awesome!! Thank you!! Oh and for the review thing, I thank you again!! LOL. ^_^;;; I will be e-mailing you a.s.a.p!!
can you tell me where to read your book i dont know where to find it
Interesting! I read it, and was very excited! I'm writin' a comix about Naru- Sakura's daughter.
Great job! I reeeellly enjoyed that and I hope u can continue the story soon!
Thank you!!!! =^__^= Please join the Forum and introduce your self on the members page!! ^__^ See you there!
I luv how da story is goin' so far!!
Spice somethin' up between Li & Sakura,cuz I luv 2 c dese 2 2gether!
can't wait 4 da next!
Thankx Kaji!! ^__^
LOL... Yeah... that may be a good a idea..
How mazing is this! I am too writing a story bout Sakura..not her love life or her grown up..but i want to giv eup now...it seems so crap compared 2 urs!
I dont read much [like neva eva] but ur story was awsome..
Ive alwayz wanted tha cardcaptor story 2 go on and 2 c what happends 2 sakura n friends wen they get older..you done a cool az job on doing dat..i hope it makes it on da big screen..keep it up..n ur website so super cool
ps do u have a boyfriend...
it's so great...i wish i could make stories like you...
btw i hope you guys visit the website i have!
i like this site so much!
i wonder if you will have any movies?
this site is... shocking...
Thankx you guys!! Oh!! Oh!!
BTW, Dilemma has a NEW layout!! ^.^
Also, if you're going to comment on Dilemma, please add you comments here:
Thankx again!! And keep reading Dilemma! ^_^
woweeee! i love this story so far! being a writer my self, i no good fantasy when i see it! keep up the work girl! hope we can b affies when my sites complete!
Wow. I love this story so far! I've only just started readin it yesterday and am already up to where it would be updated. lol ( that proves how much of a good story it is .
I can't wait 'till you update
I really liked the story. it was tight. Her hair ( sakura) being long is the best pic that ive actually seen. I enjoyed it. I thought li was going to get really mad about Sakuras and Eric"s relationship. Pretty nice twist. I liked it and was surprised.
I have read the first page of chapter one and found the story enjoyable so far...except (regrettably) for your prologue...your grammar and sentence structure were horrible. I have copied and pasted this portion of the story here and have italicized the corrections for you and deleted any words that were not necessary. Please compared it to what you have written. I know criticism is hard to take but grammar and sentence structure are important for a story to flow properly.
Sakura and Li are (1) a happy couple, whoenjoy (2) the beginning of their teenage life. Madison, who (3) still carries a video camera wherever she goes, Kero, and the fighter girl, Meilin, accompany (4) the couple on dates.
Everyone embraces(6) this new era where no Clow Cards or mysterious auras are (7) sensed.
1. (the verb 'is' is a singular form used with a singular or one noun, you are writing about two (or more) people and therefore need a plural verb)
2. (the 's' at the end was not needed)
3. (the 'm' was not needed)
4. (sentence structure was poor and confusing)
5. (Sakura and Li were removed and 'couple' put in place of the names because they were used at the beginning of the paragraph. The reader can safely assume "the couple" refers to Sakura and Li)
6. (poor sentence structure)
7. ('were' was changed to 'are' because you are writing in the present, 'were' is used when writing about the past)
Yo!! PSM's work is not sum stuffy, rigid piece of grammar!! For ur info, ur 'corrections' R mixin up the flow of PSM's story. Sakura is a teen, not a pensioner! The orginal flow is just right for the story! If u hav a prob with tht, don't read it! But deffo dnt try and correct it! Thtz wrong!! Im an author to, and i think wat u've dun is way outta order. As for the grammar, spellin, sentence structure in dis msg? Lol dnt even go there!!!
Keep up da gud work PSM!
LOL ive had ma rant now!!
Cardcaptor KeKe x
Oh, and Alice? I forgot to mention. Before critising others, check ur own work!! I quote "Please compared it to what you have written" I'm no Grammar fan, but shouldn't it read "Please compare it...."
Cardcaptor KeKe xx
Your story was very nice and intresting! I've been telling it to my cousin and she also thinks that it is COOOOOL! Though, I was sad when you weren't able to do Chap. 5 why? Anywayz! I am looking forward to read the Chap. 5! Hope that you will update it soon! I also hope that many would read your dilemma!!!!
Lots of LOVE,
Card-captor_sakura A.K.A SAkura fan!
cool site, have u heard of Tsubasa Reservoir chronicles? it has the actual love ife of Sakura and Syaoran. Anyways ur a great writer! loved reading it!
Cool Fanfiction!!! I luved reading it! have u heard about Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicle? Sakura's actually a Teenager in that and it was created by clamp!^^ Its also about the love life of Sakura and Syaoran ^^.
what pg does dilemma finishes or continues?please e-mail me back.o yea great story its amazing!!!!
I really really love your story and I really hate reading!
I was wondering if you were going to finish it or something cuz I'd really like to know the rest!
Is there another website or something? pls email me
your story is so nice. and the pop-up you have after i read finished some of the chapters are so cute. your idea is nice. sorry, my sentence are short. my english is bad. sorry. but, i enjoyed your story a lot.