No harm done :) I was hoping for an English teacher or professor to help me on this one. I know I have a completely different tone when I am talking to those I consider "friends" but in my paper I have a wider vocabulary spread. I just don't see a point in trying if there isn't a grade lol. I am a nursing major with a minor in nutrition not English.... There were several people including my old high school English teachers and my English Comp. II professor proof it before submitting it... I should add that it was an A paper Thank you for your input!!! Greatly appreciatiated!! I am toying with the idea right now of publishing, but I want to know what work goes into it first.